i'll try to stay serius reviewing this crap...
well i could diss your whole movie on evry front (sutch as sound, graphic's etc.)
but instead i'll give u some tip's:
1. turn the frame-rate up coz this is tooo slow,
and try to not just turn it up but actually make more pictures
2. don't use that standart sounds; they suck ass
3. dude...be honest...it looks like crap...i m sure that -if u spend a little more time - u could do better(that actually go's for the whole movie)
well good luck...i look forward to youre next -greatly improved movie -
p.s. if u make the line's u use for the stick's bigger it looks better